Nightmarish -
This is more nightmarish than informative, and it just states the obvious until it loops. I assume the old woman is to be a joke, however it's just creepy instead, so what message did you want to send out here truly?
LoZM
Nightmarish -
This is more nightmarish than informative, and it just states the obvious until it loops. I assume the old woman is to be a joke, however it's just creepy instead, so what message did you want to send out here truly?
LoZM
That your mother gotno flowers. Howcould you! Its your mother. Make her a card!
NICE -
I enjoy anything badass that involves Nene. The only problem I had with this flash is the lack of sound effects, however the length, animation, color, backgrounds, and dialogue bubbles make up for it entirely. This is my favorite of 2010, good work in only three weeks, that's impressive.
LoZM
Well -
I tried to interact with it, maybe it had something more to offer, however it lacks the creativity to allow me to do so. It's just a picture of a telephone, no animation = abysmal.
LoZM
Cool -
Animation and detail is great, however there is a 30 second white screen after your productions logo that will make a lot of people immediately cancel out of your flash or blam it without regard. I refreshed and gave it 30 seconds, but then it happened to pop on. For what I saw, it looks like something that will be really entertaining. Should be a great series, I hope!
LoZM
Oh man that's not good. That doesn't happen on my computer. Wonder why? I think I'm going to have to pull it off till I figure that out.
Thanks for the input.
Unique Symbolism -
The symbolism in the narrative was real unique. The animation was good, it wasn't choppy and it had enough motion and detail to keep me engaged. It was a smart move to not use the full song, otherwise it could have gotten real boring, but the video was a good piece of flash, nice work!
LoZM
Thanks a lot! You know, my main purpose was to "translate" the song into a movie, my way, using lots and lots of symbols. I'm happy you noticed that, meaning i've reach my goal.
Pretty Good -
I liked the animation, that was your strong point. The detailed backgrounds and colors were close to the original, a lot of people would have just used sprites for a movie like this. Favorite part was the brickwall, that made me laugh. I also enjoyed the acid part. I couldn't understand the other parts, leaving me just sitting there, however the flash was pretty good.
LoZM
N/A
I agree at the fact that this flash is too quiet. I also wonder why Link talks when Kirby doesn't say anything. I liked it for what it was until the 'vision/action' spark that Sonic performed before attacking. That made it too much like a flash influenced by Alvin Earthworm, kinda felt like a fan-duplicate of something already done. Next time give the audio portal a look and see what you can put in your work.
LoZM
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This flash is for a limited audience seeing that you can barely understand the English that the characters are speaking. It has no purpose that I can recognize, even after replaying it. Keep practicing and your animation will reach awesome status, until then try to keep away from colorless backgrounds, strange shape characters, and bad voice acting.
LoZM
I need a place for favorites, and as you see I have a ton of them. I compose music and I review and vote on others' submissions. I am discreet and judge fairly based on my design for systematical analysis that determines what is amazing and what is crap.
Age 37, Male
AMC Theatres
The University of Oklahoma
Tulsa, Oklahoma
Joined on 11/13/06