Ok here we go -
Just how creative is lyrics as a flash? Not a bit, and with no concept that helps fulfill the purpose makes this flash even hard to review. There is really nothing to this flash that entertains the person who watches it.
LoZM
Ok here we go -
Just how creative is lyrics as a flash? Not a bit, and with no concept that helps fulfill the purpose makes this flash even hard to review. There is really nothing to this flash that entertains the person who watches it.
LoZM
So...
This is cool, it would help some people learn to draw better whenever they are attempting flash. To admit, I don't know how to draw people very well so I would find this helpful. A piece of advice though, add music or some soft sounds to go with it. It would also be cool if you animated your drawing instead of clicks between changes, if that makes any sense. That way the motion could help those that wish to follow along.
LoZM
I like it - Nice work
Nice backgrounds and models, music, and story. I love the story, thought it was mystical with the music. Highly enjoyable, the characters are pretty cool with the wings and such - what do the bells represent? I couldn't figure it out. Are they what start the storm?
LoZM
Hmm...
Too short and lame, just another way to turn a character downward. Too much sound, my eardrums almost blew out. The concept of getting high is out and no longer really funny unless you make something worth watching, this however is not.
LoZM
Here we go -
This is cool for 5 seconds and then the person watching wants something else to happen, though you keep the two people on the screen doing the same thing over and over. Your comment on this submission needs to claim why you made this and its purpose to help us review it better. To me this just looks like you were practicing flash or something. I had to close out of this flash, I didn't want to continue the non-stop dancing just to see it loop and start over. Put more into your work, differentiate the animation.
LoZM
Awesome.
This flash was the perfect example of what Zelda would've had looked like if they placed it as a release title for the N64. It was a cool fight, Link was in a suit - thought that was cool - as if he was a secret agent or something. The lag was a bit distracting, but that didn't matter since you rarely ever see something in 3D on Newgrounds. Nice work, creative and original. I'm a fan of your work.
LoZM
Nice trailer but -
This is a preview of what your flash will end up as, non stop slashing bad guys. Smart that you submitted a trailer so that you can see what to fix. The animation is great, I like the details. Choose the music wisely though, nothing generic or off topic with the theme of the narrative. Double this presentation and fix some mistakes and this is well off to get a 9 or a 10 when people truly vote for it. I look forward to your updates.
LoZM
What?
You build up the narrative and then cut the flash off? Maybe it would be better to post this on forums or something since it is incomplete. This way people don't have to review it to give you ideas, and can post replies instead. It will strike discussions that way. I like your details though, the background and gun look good.
LoZM
I need a place for favorites, and as you see I have a ton of them. I compose music and I review and vote on others' submissions. I am discreet and judge fairly based on my design for systematical analysis that determines what is amazing and what is crap.
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